This is an interesting picture (a little shadowy), but you're not doing much to tease me. You've labeled the photo as though you were storing it for later use, but this is a live, published photograph. You have to use your big words to explain this content to people. Most people don't know who Troy Davis is, so you have to tell us that. We need to know when and where this photo was taken. And if there's a story to follow, tell readers to check back later for more information.
Marcus,
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting picture (a little shadowy), but you're not doing much to tease me. You've labeled the photo as though you were storing it for later use, but this is a live, published photograph. You have to use your big words to explain this content to people. Most people don't know who Troy Davis is, so you have to tell us that. We need to know when and where this photo was taken. And if there's a story to follow, tell readers to check back later for more information.