Reporting from the Maymester editing class of the Grady College of Journalism and Mass Communication at the University of Georgia.
Wednesday, May 20, 2009
The University of Georgia Fine Arts Buidling on Baldwin Street in Athens, Ga. is undergoing construction to repair and waterproof its foundation on Wedneday, May 20, 2009. (Photo by Leila Mattimore)
Fine picture here and pretty good cutline, except you want to write a second sentence to alert your audience that a story with more details is coming up. That's a key reason for posting a stand-alone photo like this.
A couple of technical things:
-- You want a comma after Ga. to complete the punctuation for the nonessential phrase.
Leila,
ReplyDeleteFine picture here and pretty good cutline, except you want to write a second sentence to alert your audience that a story with more details is coming up. That's a key reason for posting a stand-alone photo like this.
A couple of technical things:
-- You want a comma after Ga. to complete the punctuation for the nonessential phrase.
-- You misspelled Wednesday.
Make sure to write a headline for all posts.