
Dorothy Bolton, an employee at Oglethorpe Dining Commons poses for a picture while placing cake slices on the dessert bar.
Photo by Suha Zakiuddin
-Edited by Bailey Keiger
Reporting from the Maymester editing class of the Grady College of Journalism and Mass Communication at the University of Georgia.
Bailey and Suha,
ReplyDeleteNice little environmental portrait here. In terms of posting, make sure to let your audience know why this picture is here. Write a second sentence for the cutline letting people know they can check back later for a story about the commons. Make sure the cutline answers the question WHEN. Put a comma after "Commons" to complete the pair for your nonessential phrase. And write a headline that tells a story, not just a label.